The Writer's Gazebo - Tips to Improve Your Writing Through Empathetic Thought & Precision Editing

After 60 years of observing and writing aboutwonder around when the body is as well.
my fellow inhabitants of Planet Earth, I can't recallEditing: the Heart of Good Writing
ever thinking that anyone did not have a story.Shoddy editing is rampant nowadays. Beyond
Whether it is the true account of your life'spoor spelling and grammar, haphazardly organized,
journey, your perspectives on the world or aredundant and one-dimensional prose passes as
fictional tale, everyone has something unique thatwell-written. In our instant-gratification-oriented
could be captured through the written word.culture, people expect excellent writing to
Why then, do so few write? There are manyinstantaneously flow from their fingertips. When it
reasons; from the profoundly sad belief that theydoesn't, which is typical even for the best writers,
have nothing to offer to the absurdly arrogantfrustration paralyzes them.
notion that their story is so special that someoneEditing is not merely going over a piece three or
else should be writing it, excuses abound. Twofour times. The process, for most of us, is
things, however, stand out as a plague impactingpainstaking and ubiquitous. It surprises me what I
most would-be writers: they don't recognize thewill discover in a piece even after I have reread it
importance of deliberate and protracteddozens of times. Embrace this reality and join the
empathetic thought, and they haven'tclub. Passing this job off to an editor in the early
incorporated the respect for and the process ofstages of writing is giving control of your story to
editing.someone who doesn't have the benefit of your
Time Away From the Computer: The Benefits ofbest effort. It can lead to expense and heartache.
ThinkingTips for Becoming a Better Editor
When J.K Rowling came up with the idea for theThe type of editing which captures the best of
Harry Potter series, she was on a train withoutyour writing and incorporates the most of your
pen and paper. She has often said that this was athinking is precision editing. There is a magic that
blessing, because she spent the time thinkinghappens when pen hits paper or fingers dance on
through the story.the keyboard, but it is the pre thinking and the
Thought is a far more efficient method of testingsecurity of knowing that you will deliberately and
plot lines and character attributes than writingrepeatedly pick through a piece for a standard list
them down. Making snap decisions about aof issues that makes the magic possible.
character's background, without walking in thatThe process starts with double-checking spelling
character's shoes along the paths which led to theand grammar. Relying on Spell Check is not
story at hand, leaves the writer with lesssufficient and will lead to glaring errors. Here are
information about the story.five other things to keep in mind:
While the fingers are poised above the keyboard
or curled around a pen, questions that arise about1. Vary the structure of your sentences.
the things necessary to carry out a given plot are2. Use sentence structure to build or dissipate
often brushed to the back of the mind. However,tension.
they can be explored in the imagination to their3. Develop a personal sense of the balance
logical conclusion. In nonfiction, thinking about abetween dialog (quotes in nonfiction) and narrative.
story can uncover underlying assumptions that4. Reread to verify the sequence in which
need clarification and other issues which willinformation is presented.
ultimately lead to a more interesting, more5. Double-check for the accuracy of your
informative piece.information in fiction as well as nonfiction.
So, take a walk. The imagination is freer to